The black clad girl shook with the sound, falling amidst the uncaring crowd. Fingers brush against skin and an elderly man bends and catches, joints creaking.
His face is kind, and worn of years well lived. Even then, the girl recoils.. But too late.
She sees a small boy, chasing butterflies as his parents look on..
The boy, older now, holding a lost tooth proudly..
A man, familiar now, dressed in sailor white and greeting the shore with a smile, gaze fixed on inkstained legs and a low-cut dress..
The same kind face, younger but unchanged, reaching to help the fallen barber, redness leaking from a nick about an ear..
The girl runs, hands clenched tight about scraps of paper.
She lays them on a wooden cabinet, all four in their place. A label reads "Ernest Whennerby"
The gathered sea of coats don't notice the body until someone trips.

Not bad for a first timer. Not bad indeed. I love how you managed to capture the whole gathering in the prompt - it takes great creativity to do so...!
ReplyDeleteGreat tapestry of words combining all those images.
ReplyDeleteOh wow, you're doing this, too?! Great! I didn't think anyone from GW was blogging. I'll add you, then. I've sort of removed the "collaborative" portion of my blog (So much editing!). I'm just putting up my own junk and working toward some self publication. But I haunt a lot of writing blogs. Check my Study if you're interested in other blog parties or events. And keep an eye on Magpie tales. I love their little photo-blog hop. Loved your post for it. =)
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark and stormy night .......Well done , Mr Bulwer Lytton
ReplyDeleteSuch a clever approach, I love it.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the unique take you had on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteStartlingly innovative...
ReplyDeleteCaptivating and creative...
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